loving bitches n bastards-8

after crying for days , the only way she could think of, to bring her life back on track was distraction. yes she had to distract herself, her mind, her heart, her soul from thinking about him. with full determination she decided that she'd go to college from tomorrow and would concentrate on her life , her career and would pay attention on what is happening in her life than what is he doing and what is happening in his life. hmmm... going back to college , attending lecture, hanging out with friends this is what all happened , she was dying to see him but she held back her emotions and abstained herself from doing so. days passed away, though she didn't cry , neither did she go to see him ( nor did he come) but he still was there in her heart, she wasn't whining any longer but she hadn't moved on either. but things had changed, instead of noticing him all the time , she had started noticing the world around her, and what she was noticing lately was a guy staring at her in a most peculiar way. she dared enough and went up to him to ask what was the matter with him, and to her surprise he was her childhood friend , yes he was, her long lost friend whom she was seeing almost after 5 years. she beamed up with smile( smile came on her face after days of crying) and so was he. the rest of the day passed away in chit-chatting between friends, what happened in his life, what all did she went through . they told each other everything. he was happy seeing his friend after so long and she felt light-headed, as she had spilled all her sorrows to him( and after such a long time she had experienced this tranquility, as she had found a new friend or may be an old friend with all new dimensions)

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  1. Soo happy for the gal...Finally she has found a reason to smile.
    Your story reminds me of my own documentary film "Pehle Pyar Ke Failures"..:)

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  2. Wow!!! Teri love story mein 1 naya twist....

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  3. Amazing story... Sumthing related to my thots these days... very nice.. keep updating wd these type of story dear.. garima........

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  4. "the rest of the day passed away in chit-chatting between friends, what happened in his life,what all did she went through . "-

    should be --
    "what all did she go through ." OR
    "what all she had gone through ."

    ". he was happy seeing his friend"- S is missing

    instead of chit-chatting, use the words 'casual banter' or chit-chat... chit chatting isn't right.

    Improve your grammar, your vocabulary is good!
    These were noticeable. Will need more time to find out all the mistakes!

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  5. nice observation i didn't notice about that went- go grammatical error and thanks for the word 'casual banter' new for me

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